After the audience feedback the main fault with the front cover was the quality of the photo. Because of this I have lowered the brightness to make the picture look less harsh. Another fault with the front cover was the size of the pictures. For this reason I have made the pictures bigger to fill more space.
Contents page
The main issue with the contents page after the audience feedback was that it is too crowded. For this reason I have decreased the size of the text so that the contents page looks less full.
Double page spread
The main problem with the double page spread from the audience feedback was the size of the picture. Because of this I have made the main picture bigger. I have also slightly adjusted the size of the text in the article as that was also shown as an issue.
